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du Xiao Yao
2019-05-14

Guidelines: What is a "description that contains a great deal of pomp"?

What's the problem?

"Flattering descriptions" are those that are written on promotional materials specifically for customers to read. It looks pretty, but it's not really informative.
For example, "quality service", "strong faculty", "excellence in diagnosis and treatment concept", "following the world trend", "elegant and comfortable environment", "excellent product quality", "the purpose of careful service", "well received by the masses" and so on.
The above kind of text is more suitable for text advertising, propaganda, and what, what is written in the encyclopedia is too bad.

【 How to solve? 】

Encyclopedia content, pay attention to objective refining. Each sentence should be informative and the whole should be as concise as possible.
Just delete all the words mentioned above. It's enough to keep only dry goods. Of course, dry goods should have reference sources.

Thank you for reading and I hope I can help you.

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